Guided Composition on Bicycle or Automobile Composition English Grammar Primary 5 First Term Lesson Notes Week 6

Composition English Grammar Primary 5 First Term Lesson Notes Week 6

Subject: English Composition
Class: Primary 5
Term: First Term
Week: 6
Age: 9-10 years
Topic: Descriptive Writing
Sub-topic: Writing a Descriptive Essay on a Bicycle or Automobile
Duration: 60 minutes

Behavioural Objectives

By the end of the lesson, pupils should be able to:

1. Highlight the features of a descriptive essay.
2. Describe the features of a bicycle or automobile.
3. Develop outlines for a descriptive essay.
4. Write a descriptive essay on either a bicycle or an automobile.

Keywords

• Descriptive essay
• Features
• Outline
• Sensory details

Set Induction

• Begin by asking pupils to describe their favorite object in a few words. Discuss how using descriptive words can paint a clear picture in the reader’s mind.

Entry Behaviour

• Pupils are familiar with basic writing skills and have written short essays before.

Learning Resources and Materials

• Sample descriptive essays
• Pictures of bicycles and automobiles
• Writing materials (paper, pencil)

Building Background/Connection to Prior Knowledge

• Pupils have learned how to write simple descriptive sentences and can use sensory words (sight, sound, touch) in their writing.

Embedded Core Skills

• Writing
• Observation
• Creativity

Learning Materials

• Example of a descriptive essay
• Structure guide for writing descriptive essays

Reference Books

• Lagos State Scheme of Work
• Primary 5 English Language Textbook

Instructional Materials

• Whiteboard and markers
• Printed pictures of bicycles and automobiles

Content

Features of a Descriptive Essay:

1. Introduction: Presents the object to be described.
2. Body:
   • Sensory Details: Uses words that appeal to the five senses (sight, sound, touch, smell, taste).
   • Features: Describes the appearance, function, and any special qualities of the object.
3. Conclusion: Summarizes the description or explains the object’s importance.

Example Outline for a Descriptive Essay:

1. Introduction: Introduce the object (e.g., My Bicycle).
2. Body:
   • Appearance: Color, shape, size, design.
   • Function: How it works, what it is used for.
   • Special Features: Unique aspects, why it is important.
3. Conclusion: Wrap up the description and state why the object is special to you.

Example of a Descriptive Essay:

“My Bicycle is my favorite possession. It is bright red with shiny silver wheels. The seat is soft and comfortable, perfect for long rides. My bicycle has a small basket in front where I keep my water bottle and snacks. I love riding it to the park because it is fast and smooth. The sound of the wheels turning makes me feel happy and free. My bicycle is more than just a mode of transport; it is my companion on many adventures.”

Evaluation

1. What is the first part of a descriptive essay?
   a) Body
   b) Conclusion
   c) Introduction
   d) Summary
2. Which of the following senses is often used in descriptive writing?
   a) Sight
   b) Humor
   c) Speed
   d) Age
3. In a descriptive essay, the features of an object are described in the ______.
   a) Introduction
   b) Body
   c) Conclusion
   d) Title
4. Which of the following is an example of a sensory detail?
   a) “The car is red.”
   b) “The car smells like leather.”
   c) “The car is old.”
   d) “The car is fast.”
5. The last part of a descriptive essay is the ______.
   a) Introduction
   b) Title
   c) Conclusion
   d) Body
6. In describing an automobile, which detail is most likely to be included?
   a) Its taste
   b) Its price
   c) Its engine sound
   d) Its height
7. Descriptive writing should make the reader ______.
   a) Confused
   b) Bored
   c) Visualize
   d) Ignore
8. What is the purpose of using sensory details in a descriptive essay?
   a) To create a vivid image in the reader’s mind
   b) To list facts
   c) To make the essay longer
   d) To confuse the reader
9. The sentence “The bicycle’s tires are smooth and black” appeals to which sense?
   a) Smell
   b) Taste
   c) Touch
   d) Sight
10. What should you include in the conclusion of a descriptive essay?
    a) New information
    b) A summary of the description
    c) Random thoughts
    d) Another introduction

Class Activity Discussion

1. Q: What is the main purpose of a descriptive essay?
   A: To provide a detailed description of an object or scene using sensory details.
2. Q: Why is it important to use sensory details in descriptive writing?
   A: Sensory details help the reader imagine the object or scene being described.
3. Q: How do you begin a descriptive essay?
   A: By introducing the object or scene you are going to describe.
4. Q: What should the body of a descriptive essay contain?
   A: Detailed descriptions of the object’s appearance, function, and features.
5. Q: How does the conclusion of a descriptive essay differ from the body?
   A: The conclusion summarizes the description and may explain why the object is important.
6. Q: Can a descriptive essay describe a person?
   A: Yes, a descriptive essay can describe a person, object, place, or event.
7. Q: What sense does the word “smooth” appeal to?
   A: Touch
8. Q: What is one important thing to remember when writing a descriptive essay?
   A: Use clear and vivid language to create a strong image for the reader.
9. Q: Should you include your own feelings in a descriptive essay?
   A: Yes, describing how the object makes you feel can make the essay more engaging.
10. Q: How can you make a descriptive essay more interesting?
    A: By using a variety of sensory details and descriptive words.

Presentation

Step 1: The teacher revises the previous topic, which was “Formal Letter Writing.”
Step 2: The teacher introduces the new topic: “Descriptive Writing: Bicycle or Automobile.”
Step 3: The teacher allows the pupils to describe their bicycles or cars they’ve seen, focusing on sensory details and features.

Teacher’s Activities

• Explain the structure of a descriptive essay.
• Provide examples and guide pupils in writing their descriptive essays.
• Encourage pupils to use sensory details in their writing.

Learners’ Activities

• Discuss the features of a descriptive essay.
• Develop an outline for their descriptive essay.
• Write a descriptive essay on either a bicycle or an automobile.

Assessment

• Pupils will write a descriptive essay and submit it for grading, ensuring they use sensory details and follow the correct format.

Evaluation Questions

1. What is a descriptive essay?
2. What should you include in the introduction of a descriptive essay?
3. How do sensory details improve a descriptive essay?
4. What should the body of a descriptive essay focus on?
5. How do you conclude a descriptive essay?
6. Why is it important to describe the features of the object in detail?
7. What are some examples of sensory details?
8. How can you make your descriptive essay more engaging?
9. What is the purpose of using vivid language in a descriptive essay?
10. What should be avoided in a descriptive essay?

Conclusion

• The teacher will review the pupils’ descriptive essays, provide feedback, and correct any mistakes.

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